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Ugly First Pass

A counter-spell for perfectionism loops. Use it when the Wyrm whispers that the draft is not ready and you know it never will be.

Use this ritual when Perfection Wyrm has you editing paragraph one for the third hour while paragraphs two through ten do not exist yet. The point is not to write badly on purpose. The point is to let the whole shape exist before any part of it gets polished.

The oath

My first job is existence, not elegance.

I will make the whole shape before I polish any sentence.

How to use it

  1. Set a timer for the entire draft, not the first section.
  2. Write every section as bullet points, placeholders, or garbage prose. All of it counts.
  3. Mark anything that feels wrong with [FIX LATER] and keep moving.
  4. When the timer ends, you have a full ugly shape. Now you may polish.

Why it helps

  • It separates creation from editing, which use different brain modes.
  • It removes the Wyrm's leverage: you cannot endlessly revise what does not exist yet.
  • It makes "done" visible before "perfect" gets a vote.

Use it when

You have rewritten the opening three times and the rest of the thing is still blank.

Finishing feels riskier than another round of edits.

Minimal prompt

Ugly First Pass
My first job is existence, not elegance.
Sections to rough out: [   ] [   ] [   ] [   ]
[FIX LATER] count: ___
Ship line: when __________ is done, I send it.
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